2007年4月7日 星期六

"The Missing Piece Meets the Big O" outen the friendship

The story “The Missing Piece Meets the Big O” by Shel Silver stein is delineation about one missing piece was finding another imperfect to match. And he met many different configurations but no one he could fit in. At last he meets the big o who told him “There is no place would you fit. You should roll by yourself.” So the missing piece became a roll by himself.

After I read this story I think it can represent “friendship”. Everyone has the defects of his qualities even though the saint. In the process those configurations which the missing piece met represent ones friends in his life. First he met the quadrate even he can fit in but it not the roll. That means they are always fighting because their concept might be different. So they can’t move. There is another can move but not fit in because their thinking, character, methods are different. And some might fit in but they didn’t know the method because their perception is dissimilitude. They are selfish that never care about others opinion. At last he met the big O who is a perfect one. So the missing piece was rolled by himself like people amend their blemish.

Wear away one’s sharp and be better to myself can make more friends.


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鳳娟 提到...
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鳳娟 提到...

Hey!
You do a good job.
By the way, take care of youself.

yamimuki 提到...
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yamimuki 提到...

You have a different thought from me. But I agree with your idea. After reading your article, I have a different way to read the story.

Sabina 提到...

wow! You wrote so much! you did a good job!

yamimuki 提到...

Hi, Peggy. I’m Eva. I have read your reflection “The Missing Piece Meets The Big O .” You really did a great job. But it’s still having some wrong grammar.

Here are some advices that I think you can take into consideration. For example, on line 1, you should add “was written” in front of “by.” On line 2, “is delineation” should be corrected “who is delineating.” On line 6, “would you” should be modified “you would.” On line11, you should add “,” after “in the progress.” On line13,”ones friends” should be modified “one of his friends.” And on line 25.you should add “it’ll” in front of “be better.”

I think you really made an excellent reflection, although it’s still having a little wrong grammar. You have be more progressive than before. And the different reflection makes me have a new thought for the story.

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